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    ramo | 07:18:40 PM | 20/Sep/08
two contents of ur blog stop me to read, thanks
    AAMEEN KHAN | 03:06:00 PM | 03/Jul/08  |  
Male capricorn  zelon
DREAM SELLERS
INTERNATIONAL ::::::
Yahaan Sapane Kharide
Jaatey hai; Beche Jaatey
hai...... AUR Repair Bhi
Hotey hai.......
I want to bring to your attention that Mr. Iftekhar Ahmed has stolen my poem and published on his name. Today he has done this with me tomorrow he may do the same thing with u people also.... Please request him to delete my poem HAQEEQAT from his iland. As u know I have written this poem long back and you all my dear friends have commented also. I have already told him.....but I feel if he is pressurised, then he may not dare to do such things in future. His URL is : Iftekhar.rediffiland.com
Please help me out…. Regards ……………………aameen
    AAMEEN KHAN | 01:49:27 PM | 14/Jun/08  |  
Male capricorn  zelon
DREAM SELLERS
INTERNATIONAL ::::::
Yahaan Sapane Kharide
Jaatey hai; Beche Jaatey
hai...... AUR Repair Bhi
Hotey hai.......
Sweety........dear how r u?????? after a long time.....
    Shreya Tiwari | 05:15:13 PM | 02/Jun/08  |  
Male taurus  Mumbai
Writing Hindi Poems &
Songs. I write songs and
lyrics for films, this I
do just for fun. I do it
for part time.
Thanks a ton Sweety,

You wrote such a nice comment, I am obliged. "Mai mere maa baap ki respect hi nahi karta, balki unki puja karta hun" And not only parents, mai har buzurg ka respect karta hun. I am sharing 4 lines of my CHAND which i wrote for parents......!!

Ki Mata Pita dono meri aankho ke hai tare,
Aur unke charan mere mandiron ke dwar hai...!!
Unka samman hi hai, meri sarv-shreshtha pooja,
Vo hi is jahan ke prabhu vo hi avtaar hai...!

---------Shreya Tiwari
Mumbai.
    Shreya Tiwari | 05:08:27 PM | 02/Jun/08  |  
Male taurus  Mumbai
Writing Hindi Poems &
Songs. I write songs and
lyrics for films, this I
do just for fun. I do it
for part time.
Thanks a ton Sweety,

You wrote such a nice comment, I am obliged. "Mai mere maa baap ki respect hi nahi karta, balki unki puja karta hun" And not only parents, mai har buzurg ka respect karta hun. I am sharing 4 lines of my CHAND which i wrote for parents......!!

Ki Mata Pita dono meri aankho ke hai tare,
Aur unke charan mere mandiron ke dwar hai...!!
Unka samman hi hai, meri sarv-shreshtha pooja,
Vo hi is jahan ke prabhu vo hi avtaar hai...!

---------Shreya Tiwari
Mumbai.
    chetan lakhani | 03:08:06 PM | 28/May/08  |  
Male virgo  Baroda
reading,traveling,music
hay swety.......
thx 4 stop in my page n say something.wel come.then i give u answer.
it\'s my plazer.i like your jok.dearrrrrrr
    chetan lakhani | 03:05:05 PM | 28/May/08  |  
Male virgo  Baroda
reading,traveling,music
hay swety.......
thx 4 stop in my page n say something.wel come.then i give u answer.
it\\\'s my plazer.i like your jok.dearrrrrrr
    chetan lakhani | 03:03:41 PM | 28/May/08  |  
Male virgo  Baroda
reading,traveling,music
hay swety.......
thx 4 stop in my page n say something.wel come.then i give u answer.
it's my plazer.i like your jok.dearrrrrrr
    Shreya Tiwari | 12:38:54 PM | 22/May/08  |  
Male taurus  Mumbai
Writing Hindi Poems &
Songs. I write songs and
lyrics for films, this I
do just for fun. I do it
for part time.
Hi Sweety..!!

Thanks a ton. I am really your fan...you appreciated my poetry. That is the reason I am writting better for you. Sweety I am sharing 4 lines with you........,

yun to har kavi ke kuchh apne yatn hua karte hai..,
kavita likhne ke bhi to kuchh dhang hua karte hai..!!
jo apni kavitaon par khud magn hua karte hai..
or shrota hi samman na de.......
to kavi ke prayas jagat me vyarth hua karte hai.

Keep reading.....

Shreya Tiwari
Mumbai
    chetan lakhani | 05:59:43 PM | 09/May/08  |  
Male virgo  Baroda
reading,traveling,music
thax a lot ,dearrrrrrrrr.
theri dosthi hum is tharah nibhayenge,
thum roz khafa hona hum roz manayenge,
par maan jana manane se,
varna yeh bheegi palkein leke kaha jayenge.....